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Press Releases
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editing


Our editing services insure that the release you drafted includes the seven basic components of a Press Release in order, is well-written and presented in a factual manner.

Hyperbole, cute spins and overt sales pitches are not acceptable to media professionals.

Our professionals insure that the seven basic elements that every press release should have in terms of content and how they appear are in proper order:

  1. FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: These words should appear in the upper left-hand margin, just under your letterhead. You should capitalize every letter.

  2. Contact Information: Skip a line or two after release statement and list the name, title, telephone and fax numbers of your company spokesperson (the person with the most information). It is important to give your home number since reporters often work on deadlines and may not be available until after hours.

  3. Headline: Skip two lines after your contact information and use a boldface type.

  4. Dateline: This should be the city your press release is issued from and the date you are mailing your release.

  5. Lead Paragraph: The first paragraph needs to grasp the reader's attention and should contain the relevant information to your message such as the five W's (who, what, when, where, why).

  6. Text: The main body of your press release where your message should fully develop.

  7. Recap: In the lower left hand corner of your last page restate your product's specifications, highlight a product release date.

In addition to the above, our professional staff will check your release as follows:

  • makes sure you have something with enough substance to issue a release (newsworthiness)

  • tells the audience that the information is intended for them and why they should continue to read it

  • starts with a brief description of the news, then distinguishes who announced it, and not the other way around.

  • explains how people are going to relate to this and how they will be able to connect

  • makes sure the first 10 words of your release are effective, as they are the most important

  • avoids excessive use of adjectives and fancy language

  • deals with the facts

  • provides as much contact information as possible: individual to contact, address, phone (office, home, cell), fax, e-mail, Website address.

  • makes it as easy as possible for media representatives to do their jobs

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